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  <updated>2011-02-06T17:08:00Z</updated>
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    <title>Writing Excuses Season Two Episode Eight: The Three Act Structure</title>
    <published>2011-02-06T17:08:00Z</published>
    <updated>2011-02-06T17:08:00Z</updated>
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    <dw:music>Lookin' for a Good Time, Lady Antebellum</dw:music>
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    <content type="html">Posted by: &lt;span lj:user='mbarker.livejournal.com' style='white-space: nowrap;' class='ljuser'&gt;&lt;a href='https://www.dreamwidth.org/profile?userid=92151&amp;amp;t=I'&gt;&lt;img src='https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png' alt='[identity profile] ' width='16' height='16' style='vertical-align: text-bottom; border: 0; padding-right: 1px;' /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href='http://mbarker.livejournal.com/' rel='nofollow'&gt;&lt;b&gt;mbarker.livejournal.com&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Writing Excuses Season Two Episode Eight: The Three Act Structure&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From &lt;a href="http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/12/01/writing-excuses-season-2-episode-8-the-three-act-structure-with-bob-defendi/"&gt;http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/12/01/writing-excuses-season-2-episode-8-the-three-act-structure-with-bob-defendi/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Key points: The Three Act Structure: Act I, hero encounters problem; Act II, hero discovers problem is bigger than first thought; Act III, he triumphs anyway. Act I needs to establish the characters and the initial conflict. Act I ends when the main character enters a new world, when the battle is transformed into a war. Act II: try-fail cycles are your friend. Don't forget the twist, and a character hits rock bottom. Kick down the door: any time things are slowing down, it's time for another disaster (a.k.a. mini-climaxes). Act III: monkeys are allergic to cheese, or hidden learning lets the hero win.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___1" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://wetranscripts.dreamwidth.org/12063.html#cutid1"&gt;the transcript, more or less&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___1" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;[Dan] This is more of an outlining prompt. So your outlining prompt for this time is to sit down and plot out a very basic Three Act structure either for what you're already working on if it doesn't have one or for an entirely new idea.&lt;br /&gt;[Bob] All right.&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=wetranscripts&amp;ditemid=12063" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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    <id>tag:dreamwidth.org,2017-04-14:3071550:11329</id>
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    <title>Writing Excuses 5.22: Film Considerations [with annotations!]</title>
    <published>2011-02-05T14:37:00Z</published>
    <updated>2011-02-05T14:37:00Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">Posted by: &lt;span lj:user='mbarker.livejournal.com' style='white-space: nowrap;' class='ljuser'&gt;&lt;a href='https://www.dreamwidth.org/profile?userid=92151&amp;amp;t=I'&gt;&lt;img src='https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png' alt='[identity profile] ' width='16' height='16' style='vertical-align: text-bottom; border: 0; padding-right: 1px;' /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href='http://mbarker.livejournal.com/' rel='nofollow'&gt;&lt;b&gt;mbarker.livejournal.com&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Writing Excuses 5.22: Film Considerations [with annotations!]&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From &lt;a href="http://www.writingexcuses.com/2011/01/30/writing-excuses-5-22-film-considerations/"&gt;http://www.writingexcuses.com/2011/01/30/writing-excuses-5-22-film-considerations/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And special YouTube version at &lt;a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-wJ_3sqyG6g"&gt;http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-wJ_3sqyG6g&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Key Points: Formulas or patterns can be used for many things IF you understand why they work. Three act structure: introduce characters, setting, and problems. Then add complications. Resolve everything in the climax. If you want your story to map to a 90 minute movie, keep it lean. Know what your story is about, what you are trying to say. Think of a logline/tagline: what is the essence of your story in 8 words? The closer the events of the climax in time, the higher the emotional impact -- don't spread your resolutions out over several chapters, put them all in one. Beware the shootout, the chase, the tail end flurry that's there just to end with a bang. Make sure there is foreshadowing, motivation, and emotional movement, not just fireworks. Give the chicken a reason for crossing the road. Don't settle for a student filmmaker -- check their credits, and get the money up front. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___1" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://wetranscripts.dreamwidth.org/11329.html#cutid1"&gt;Watch out!&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___1" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;[Dan] That's true. All right. So we're just going to make Mary do this. Give us a writing prompt.&lt;br /&gt;[Howard] Writing prompt.&lt;br /&gt;[Mary] So your writing prompt... thank you for the warning.&lt;br /&gt;[Dan] That's our favorite thing to do to people.&lt;br /&gt;[Dave] Put you on the spot.&lt;br /&gt;[Mary] Your writing prompt is that you need to come up with a tagline for your novel, your short story, or something that you would like to write but have not yet written. Eight words or less.&lt;br /&gt;[Dan] Sounds good.&lt;br /&gt;[Howard] A tagline. All right. Well, this has been Writing Excuses. Thank you for listening. YouTube fans, let's all camp to the camera and wave. [Everyone turns to the camera, smiles, and waves] [End of podcast. YouTube continues] Thank you for watching. You're out of excuses. Now go write.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=wetranscripts&amp;ditemid=11329" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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    <id>tag:dreamwidth.org,2017-04-14:3071550:8553</id>
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    <title>Writing Excuses 5.22: Film Considerations</title>
    <published>2011-02-02T14:10:00Z</published>
    <updated>2011-02-02T14:10:00Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">Posted by: &lt;span lj:user='mbarker.livejournal.com' style='white-space: nowrap;' class='ljuser'&gt;&lt;a href='https://www.dreamwidth.org/profile?userid=92151&amp;amp;t=I'&gt;&lt;img src='https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png' alt='[identity profile] ' width='16' height='16' style='vertical-align: text-bottom; border: 0; padding-right: 1px;' /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href='http://mbarker.livejournal.com/' rel='nofollow'&gt;&lt;b&gt;mbarker.livejournal.com&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Writing Excuses 5.22: Film Considerations&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From &lt;a href="http://www.writingexcuses.com/2011/01/30/writing-excuses-5-22-film-considerations/"&gt;http://www.writingexcuses.com/2011/01/30/writing-excuses-5-22-film-considerations/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And special YouTube version at &lt;a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-wJ_3sqyG6g"&gt;http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-wJ_3sqyG6g&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Key Points: Formulas or patterns can be used for many things IF you understand why they work. Three act structure: introduce characters, setting, and problems. Then add complications. Resolve everything in the climax. If you want your story to map to a 90 minute movie, keep it lean. Know what your story is about, what you are trying to say. Think of a logline/tagline: what is the essence of your story in 8 words? The closer the events of the climax in time, the higher the emotional impact -- don't spread your resolutions out over several chapters, put them all in one. Beware the shootout, the chase, the tail end flurry that's there just to end with a bang. Make sure there is foreshadowing, motivation, and emotional movement, not just fireworks. Give the chicken a reason for crossing the road. Don't settle for a student filmmaker -- check their credits, and get the money up front. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___1" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://wetranscripts.dreamwidth.org/8553.html#cutid1"&gt;Meanwhile, behind the cameras, we hear...&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___1" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;[Dan] That's true. All right. So we're just going to make Mary do this. Give us a writing prompt.&lt;br /&gt;[Howard] Writing prompt.&lt;br /&gt;[Mary] So your writing prompt... thank you for the warning.&lt;br /&gt;[Dan] That's our favorite thing to do to people.&lt;br /&gt;[Dave] Put you on the spot.&lt;br /&gt;[Mary] Your writing prompt is that you need to come up with a tagline for your novel, your short story, or something that you would like to write but have not yet written. Eight words or less.&lt;br /&gt;[Dan] Sounds good.&lt;br /&gt;[Howard] A tagline. All right. Well, this has been Writing Excuses. Thank you for listening. YouTube fans, let's all camp to the camera and wave. [End of podcast. YouTube continues] Thank you for watching. You're out of excuses. Now go write.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=wetranscripts&amp;ditemid=8553" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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