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  <title>Writing Excuses Season Four Episode 25: Mating Plumage</title>
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  <description>Posted by: &lt;span lj:user=&apos;mbarker.livejournal.com&apos; style=&apos;white-space: nowrap;&apos; class=&apos;ljuser&apos;&gt;&lt;a href=&apos;https://www.dreamwidth.org/profile?userid=92151&amp;amp;t=I&apos;&gt;&lt;img src=&apos;https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png&apos; alt=&apos;[identity profile] &apos; width=&apos;16&apos; height=&apos;16&apos; style=&apos;vertical-align: text-bottom; border: 0; padding-right: 1px;&apos; /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href=&apos;http://mbarker.livejournal.com/&apos; rel=&apos;nofollow&apos;&gt;&lt;b&gt;mbarker.livejournal.com&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Writing Excuses Season Four Episode 25: Mating Plumage&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.writingexcuses.com/2010/06/27/writing-excuses-4-25-mating-plumage/&quot;&gt;http://www.writingexcuses.com/2010/06/27/writing-excuses-4-25-mating-plumage/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Key points: mating plumage -- book covers, titles, first lines. Marketing people are the ones who think of books as products. Covers mean a lot, but you may not have much control. Titles need to grab readers, make them wonder what it&apos;s about and guess at it. A title should make people want to find out more. First lines, too, should draw the reader in, make them wonder. Zingers, conflict, question, character, tone...&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class=&quot;cut-wrapper&quot;&gt;&lt;span style=&quot;display: none;&quot; id=&quot;span-cuttag___1&quot; class=&quot;cuttag&quot;&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class=&quot;cut-open&quot;&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class=&quot;cut-text&quot;&gt;&lt;a href=&quot;https://wetranscripts.dreamwidth.org/33854.html#cutid1&quot;&gt;What&apos;s under here?&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class=&quot;cut-close&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style=&quot;display: none;&quot; id=&quot;div-cuttag___1&quot; aria-live=&quot;assertive&quot;&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;[Dan] James, give us a writing prompt?&lt;br /&gt;[James] Brandon and Julie go on a safari and get attacked by monkeys.&lt;br /&gt;[Dan] All right. There you go. You are out of excuses. Now go write.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src=&quot;https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=wetranscripts&amp;ditemid=33854&quot; width=&quot;30&quot; height=&quot;12&quot; alt=&quot;comment count unavailable&quot; style=&quot;vertical-align: middle;&quot;/&gt; comments</description>
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