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Writing Excuses 11.47: Issue As a Subgenre, with Steven Barnes

From http://www.writingexcuses.com/2016/11/20/11-47-issue-as-a-subgenre-with-steven-barnes/

Key Points: One way to do issue as subgenre is as a subplot. Another way is to embody the thesis and antithesis in characters, and allow their ideas and actions to play out. You can frame those within almost any genre. Be aware of your philosophical, strategic, and tactical levels. Tactically, write the story, then find your theme. Be careful when you start with theme, because you must make the story entertaining. Beware of making a character the mouthpiece for the issue, and a one-trick pony so that every time they walk onstage, they say the same thing. Do your research, avoid just throwing in stereotypes. Understand what can go wrong with the issue, and avoid those landmines. Talk to the population affected by the issue, find out what their concerns are. Look for the mundane aspects, as well as the flashy big stuff. Start with the assumption that people are people.
Clip, snip, trip... )

[Brandon] On that, I think we're going to end. That was perfect. Mary, you've got some homework for us regarding the magazine that people read two weeks ago?
[Mary] All right. So, two weeks ago I asked you to pick up a magazine that you had nev… In an area of… That you are not necessarily interested in, and read it cover to cover including the ads. What I want you to do now is I want you to write a monologue from the point of view of the target audience for that magazine. Someone who would pick that magazine up. I want you to write a monologue where they're dealing with an issue that they're concerned with. When you do this, see if you can pair it with a subgenre at the same time.
[Brandon] Thank you to our Writing Excuses cruise members and participants.
[Whoo!]
[Brandon] Thank you so much to Steven Barnes. This was an excellent episode.
[Steven] Pleasure.
[Brandon] We appreciate you. This has been Writing Excuses. You're out of excuses. Now go write.
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Writing Excuses 5.18: Offending Your Readers

From http://www.writingexcuses.com/2011/01/02/writing-excuses-5-18-offending-your-readers/

Key Points: Eschew the egregious offense of over-explaining. Don't talk down to readers. Be careful of racial and gender demographics, BUT don't make your characters stereotypes, either. Be inclusive, but mostly, make your characters people. Burn the strawmen, dynamite Potemkin villages, and don't stack the deck. Don't moralize or preach, trust your readers. Let them read the story, learn who the characters are and what's happening, and draw their own lessons from it. Theme and realizations are one thing, soapbox orations are another. Finally, beware broken promises, especially when it is a shortcut that defaults on what could have been. But we'll come back to broken promises another time. That's a promise.
The best offenses are good defenses? )
[Brandon] I'm going to break it and say you have to... your writing prompt is to write... what was it, a vampire romance? No, a werewolf romance that does not appear it at first... that does not break any promises.
[Dan] Looks like it's going to be hard science fiction.
[Howard] Start with space opera... er, not space opera. Yeah. Start with hard science fiction, move into werewolf romance... in three paragraphs?
[Brandon] This has been Writing Excuses. You're out of excuses, and you're stupid.
[Dan] You're out of excuses and nobody likes you.
[Brandon] Sorry, I couldn't help it. Don't be offended.
[Howard] You're out of excuses, and Brandon has no self-control.
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Writing Excuses Season Four Episode Nine: How to Write Men

From http://www.writingexcuses.com/2010/03/07/writing-excuses-4-9-how-to-write-men-with-jessica-day-george/

Key points: males talk straight to the point; feminine speech patterns tend to be less direct. Beware of stereotypes, cliches, and writing every character the same. Men tend to focus on tasks; women often multitask better. Men solve problems; women talk. Write, then ask your readers whether or not it works. Your readers always know when there's a problem -- they may not know how to fix it, but they know there's a problem. Don't overthink -- keep it natural. If your brain overheats, strap ice packs to your head while writing.
under the ice pack )
[Howard] This is a fantastic writing prompt. This is your alternative history writing prompt. Go back into the 19th century, take an absurd folk belief like one of the ones that Jessica just shared with us. Take that and treat that as fact. Treat that as fact and write a story that hinges on that principle.
[Dan] Awesome.
[Brandon] This has been Writing Excuses. You're out of excuses, now go write.

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