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Writing Excuses 18.01: Twenty Twenty-Three, By Way of Introduction
 
 
Key Points:  Where is everyone? Mary Robinette is now a mid-career writer, focusing on science fiction and fantasy, with a heaping teaspoon of theater background as an influence. DongWon is a literary agent, who has worked as an editor, and brings the industry perspective, along with a deep interest in craft. Erin is an early career writer, in various formats, including tabletop role-playing games and audio narratives. She also is a teacher. Dan is starting to work as the vice president of narrative in Brandon Sanderson's company. Howard is a cartoonist who hasn't been cartooning for a while, and is finishing up the Schlock Mercenary 20 year run, and doesn't know what comes next. So, metaphorically, everyone re-introduced themselves, and there's a lot of reinventing going on! Stay tuned to see what happens next!
 
[Season 18, Episode 1]
 
[Mary Robinette] This is Writing Excuses.
[DongWon] Twenty Twenty-Three, By Way of Introduction.
[Erin] 15 minutes long.
[Dan] Because you're in a hurry.
[Howard] And we're not that smart.
[Mary Robinette] I'm Mary Robinette.
[DongWon] I'm DongWon.
[Erin] I'm Erin.
[Dan] I'm Dan.
[Howard] And I'm Howard.
 
[Dan] Welcome to 2023. This is our very first episode of the New Year, and of our new cast and format. We decided that it was time, after so many years, a decade and a half, to shake things up. So, let's start first by giving a fond and loving farewell to our founding and now emeritus member, Brandon Sanderson. He's been kind of unofficially stepped away from this show for a while now. He still comes in for a few episodes a year. He has now moved on to other things. So, farewell, Brandon.
[Mary Robinette] Yeah. He's been very supportive about the transition and about welcoming our two new hosts.
[Dan] Yeah. So we've got two brand-new core hosts this year. We're going to spend the whole 15 minutes introducing all five of us, actually, but DongWon and Erin, welcome to the show. New core hosts, new Writing Excuses wonderful people. We're happy to have you.
[DongWon] Thank you. I'm super happy to be here.
[Mary Robinette] I really wish that we had done this while we were on the cruise ship so you could hear the thunderous applause in the background. You can just imagine it though. Because we did introduce them to our… To the people on the… Who come on the Writing Excuses workshop and cruise. Who know both DongWon and Erin very well, since they been with us for several years on those.
[Yes]
[Mary Robinette] So part of what we realized was that with Brandon stepping away, we were looking at wanting to expand the cast, and we also were like we would like people who are younger than we are…
[Chuckles]
[Mary Robinette] But who also have different perspectives than we do. Who are at different places in their careers or who are coming at it from a different angle. So…
[Howard] By way of clarification, when Dan said we want to introduce you to our new hosts this year, it is not our new hosts for this year, it is our new hosts, as of this year.
[Mary Robinette] Yes.
[Howard] This is not just 2023. This is time immemorial…
[Chuckles]
[Howard] Until something terrible happens or you quit, both of which are kind of the same thing.
[Laughter]
[DongWon] We are bound to this forever.
[Mary Robinette] That's right.
 
[Dan] So, DongWon and Erin, as Mary Robinette said, they been with us on the event side for years now. DongWon's been on almost every cruise we've done. Which is wonderful. Erin has, for the last couple years, been helping us run all of the events. We're incredibly excited to have all of them now core hosts on microphone. Going forward, it's going to be cool. So what we want to do with this episode is introduce them in more detail, but also kind of reintroduce all five of us. What do we bring to the table, what kinds of things are you going to hear from us throughout the year, where we are in our career, what kind of things we're working on, what skills we're trying to develop. So let's take some time to dig into that. I would actually love to start with Mary Robinette. Tell us what you're doing and what kinds of things you are working on and what perspectives you're going to bring to us this year.
[Mary Robinette] So when I started the podcast… And this is part of why we wanted to kind of reintroduce ourselves… I was a very early career writer. I am now a decade into my career. More than that, actually. That's alarming. Anyway, I have 10 books out in the world. 10 novels. A children's book, two short story collections. I am a professional puppeteer and a voice actor. So the… My views on writing have shifted. There's a lot of things that… About the way the industry has changed since I came in that I'm excited to talk about. Also, as I have been moving through my writing process, I'm constantly having to… The shape of my imposter syndrome shifts. It never completely goes away, but the battles that I'm fighting are different each time. So you're going to get to hear from me a lot of stuff about what it's like to be a mid career writer. You're going to get to hear about the differences between writing science fiction and fantasy. You're going to get to hear about how my theater background influences the way I approach writing.
[Howard] Briefly, I'd like to take a moment and say that in our episode pie, Season Three, Episode 14, Mary Robinette came on as a guest and took principles of puppetry as they applied to writers. The whole episode, Dan and Brandon and I were just floored. Jaws dropped, being school. In that moment, the first thing we learned was, wow, it would be cool if Mary Robinette could always be with us. We didn't make that change for another couple of seasons. The second thing that we realized, kind of belatedly, is, wow, other people's perspectives can be just mind blowing, just based on a simple change to background. Sure, we're all trying to write, but we're all so danged different. Mary taught us that.
[Yay]
[Dan] Let's also point out as you were enumerating the accolades of your resume, Mary Robinette, you failed to mention that in the time since you started on our show, you have won pretty much every award this industry offers.
[Mary Robinette] Oh! Um…
[Laughter]
[Dan] You're incredibly accomplished successful and wonderful writer. So…
[Mary Robinette] Thank you. That's right. I should probably say that. I do have four Hugo awards, a Locus, a Nebula, and… Yes. I do that. Let's talk about DongWon.
 
[DongWon] Hi. I'm DongWon Song. I've guested on a number of podcasts in the past, so some of you have heard me before. I'm a literary agent by trade. I've been in the traditional publishing industry since 2005, so 17 years now, which is terrifying. Pretty much my entire adult career has been in this business. I've been an agent for seven of those years. I've worked as an editor at a big five house, I've worked in a digital publishing startup, so I have a pretty wide range of perspective. Really what I'm bringing to the podcast is a little unsurprisingly that industry perspective. I can speak to what's going on on the bookselling side, on the publishing side, what agents are looking for. Really coming at it from a perspective of not just how the writing process happens, but what happens once that gets into the hand of the industry. What are the business perspectives around that? Right? I'm someone who cares very deeply about craft, and I love talking about craft as well, but I can sort of blend that with that other perspective and bring in a little bit of context of what's happening out there on the business end of things. I really love talking about these issues. I love sort of educating people on how the business works. I love teaching craft things as well. So this is a true delight for me.
[Dan] That's great. Can I ask you for a very quick resume? When you were an editor, what kind of books people might have heard of that you worked on? Now, as an agent, who do you represent? Just so people can kind of place you in the industry.
[DongWon] Yeah. When I was an editor, I was an editor at Orbit, so I've done science fiction and fantasy primarily my whole career. As an editor, I acquired and published the first two books in The Expanse series, by Daniel Abraham and Ty Franck under the name James S. A. Corey. I published the Mira Grant books, the Feed series, under the name Mira Grant. I'm sorry, that's Seanan McGuire writing under the name Mira Grant. I've worked with Walter Jon Williams, Greg Bear, a really wide range of writers doing science fiction and fantasy in different forms. Now, as a literary agent, I do primarily science fiction and fantasy, but I also do middle grade and YA and some graphic novels as well. On the science fiction and fantasy side, I work with Sarah Gailey, Amal El-Mohtar, Max Gladstone. So they did This Is How You Lose the Time War. I've worked with Dan Scott Lynch, who is obviously a very well-known fantasy author. Arkady Martine, who has won two Hugos for her first two novels. On the young adult and middle grade side, I work with Mark Oshiro, who is co-authoring the next Rick Riordan book. Carlos Hernandez who has two really lovely little grades out from the Rick Riordan Presents line. On the graphic novel side, I work with Harmony Becker who has a memoir out by the name of Himawara House and Shing Yin Khon who has a wonderful graphic novel by the name of The Legend of Auntie Po for which they won an Eisner and were nominated for a National Book Award.
[Dan] Awesome. Cool. Thank you very much. Very excited to have you here. We are going to take a break for our thing of the week. When we come back, we will hear from Erin.
 
[Mary Robinette] I want to talk about The Lost Metal by Brandon Sanderson. I have been a fan of the Mistborn series since the moment I discovered them. It's really exciting to watch the ways Brandon keeps evolving this world. So many times when you go into a fantasy world, it's like one era and there is very little that changes. This goes through a huge evolution in the way the magic system works, in the way the characters work, and it is… I find these books so exciting. So, The Lost Metal just came out. It's the fourth and final book in the Wax and Wanes series, which is the second era of Mistborn. I recommend starting if you have… You can actually just jump in with the Wax and Wane books, but it's also really a lot of fun to go through the whole journey. I realize that I am telling you to read seven books, and I'm comfortable with that. I know what you're familiar with when you think of Brandon Sanderson. These are short for him. So I highly encourage you to pick up The Lost Metal by Brandon Sanderson.
 
[Dan] All right. Thank you very much. Now, Erin. We're so excited to have you with us. Tell us about yourself.
[Erin] So, I have to say, after these first couple of introductions, I feel like the person on the Star Trek show that's there to make the audience feel like they can relate to humans.
[Laughter]
[Erin] So I… Which is a nice way to say that I'm sort of taking the 10 years ago Mary Robinette early career writer kind of slot… Plot… Slot. I don't know what that is. Or perspective, and bringing that to the table. So I am an early career writer. I've had a few short stories published in places like Asimov's and Clarke's World and The Dark. I also like to say that I get around a bit. Which is to say that I like to write in a few different formats. I also write for tabletop role-playing games. So I have had my work in Dungeons and Dragons official books, and Pathfinder, Starfinder, all those kinds of fun tabletop games. I've also written interactive fiction. I've written for audio narrative… The audio narrative thing, Zombies Run. If you know it, you know it. If you don't…
[Mary Robinette] I love Zombies Run so much.
[Erin] So, yeah.
[Mary Robinette] Very fun being chased by zombies.
[Erin], I guess, and try out different things and see what kind of writing works in what kind of setting. I also love teaching. I teach at the University of Texas at Austin and warp the minds of the next generation. Now I'm here to do the same to you.
[Mary Robinette] The first time I saw Erin teach, I was like, "Oh. Oh, you're really good." It was… So I should also… I also want to say that Erin first came on the Writing Excuses cruise as a scholarship recipient.
[Dan] Yes.
[Mary Robinette] We have basically been impressed by her since we met her. So I'm really excited. Every time we talk, I'm like, "Oh, that's really smart." So, no pressure. No pressure at all.
[Erin] It ends here.
[Mary Robinette] Yes, well, because we're not that smart. Sorry about that. We have done that to your career.
[Dan] We're going to ruin everything now. Awesome. Erin, so excited to have you here. Thank you also for the Star Trek reference in your introduction. Back when Howard and I had a Twitch D & D show, we spun it off into a Twitch Star Trek show, and Erin was our captain on that. So… DongWon also. Actually, Mary Robinette, you're the only one that was never a cast member on our Twitch show. Sorry.
[Mary Robinette] You never invited me, so…
[Dan] I know. We should have.
[Mary Robinette] I guess I know where I stand now. Thanks.
[Dan] We'll have to resurrect that whole thing. Anyway, let's…
[Erin] You can be a Tribble.
[Chuckles]
[Mary Robinette] [squeak]
 
[Dan] All right. So it is my turn now. I also am… I have… I'm in the middle of a big career transition. About a month and a half ago, I started working full time as the vice president of narrative in Brandon Sanderson's company. So a lot of people are wondering what that means. What it mostly means is that I'm doing the same thing I used to be doing, I'm just getting paid slightly better for it now.
[Chuckles]
[Dan] I'm still writing books. I am only a year or two further into my career than Mary Robinette is. I think I have 19 books published. What I'm doing right now is mostly audio. The last several years, the Zero G series was audio originals which I wrote as scripts rather than as prose. Those I did eventually put into kind of prose format for e-book and print books, and you can find those out. Audible original Ghost Station was my brief and unsuccessful foray into historical fiction.
[I loved it]
[Dan] I'm a huge fan of that, and I tried to write one. I really like the book. All 12 people that have read the book really liked it. But it's my least successful by far.
[Mary Robinette] It's really good.
[Dan] Thank you. What I'm doing right now is I am still doing some of my own books. I'm working on a middle grade fantasy. I'm working on another YA horror series, but I'm also writing a bunch of Brandon collaborations. Our first one is called Dark One. Actually, the first thing you'll be able to read from that or listen to is another audio series. It's called Dark One Forgotten. I don't know exactly when that is launching. Sometime this month allegedly. But then eventually down the road I will be doing a Cosmere series, and lots of other things. It's been a very different experience for me to be doing. First of all, having a… What essentially is a day job again where I go to an office and I have coworkers. I haven't had that in about 15 years and it's very strange. But, yeah, I'm seeing a different side of the publishing industry. A kind of lower mid list author who is now working with the most successful fantasy author in the world, and seeing things from many different sides at once. So that's what you're going to get from me this year.
 
[Howard] Now it's my turn.
[Dan] Yes.
[Howard] I'd just like to start by saying, "Erin, get off my lawn." You're not the one who is the every person, the human being. That's been my job forever.
[Chuckles]
[Howard] I'm the not that smart. I was the not that smart for like five years and I still am. Not that smart. I'm a cartoonist. I say that with the joking self-confidence of I haven't really done any cartooning in quite a while. Because my… And I'm going to use these words absolutely unironically… My magnum opus, the Schlock Mercenary web comic, ran for 20 years with… Daily, without missing a day, and is now complete. For the next year, we're focusing on getting the last of the books into print, which is a project that I'm up to my eyeballs in, with my wife and collaborator and co-conspirator, Sandra Tayler. When that's done, I'm not sure what comes next. I don't know. What do I bring to the show? Based on what I've heard from listeners who come up to me at Gen Con and say, "Wait. Wait. I recognize that voice. Is Howard Tayler somewhere in this booth?" I think, "What the heck? How is that how someone's rec… Can you not read? My name is in 1 foot tall letters right behind my head."
[Chuckles]
[Howard] They come up and say, "Thank you so much for recasting these incredible things that everybody else says in dumb words that I get." Mwah, okay. They're not dumb words, they're words that I get. If I'm a one trick pony, the trick is a metaphor. I look for ways to take the tools that I'm always learning from our cohosts, from our guests, and trying to cast them in ways that I can actually wrap my head around them and use them. The operating question obviously is will I actually use them? What will I use them for? What is coming next? I don't have answers to those questions right now.
[Mary Robinette] But we will all discover those together.
[Yay]
[Mary Robinette] Thanks, Howard. Since you didn't actually say your name. That was Howard Tayler.
 
[Dan] So, that is what you've got coming from us in the year to come. This episode has gone long because we wanted to make sure that you are getting a good introduction to us. Our format for the year is going to be kind of similar to this. We are going to take the time to dig into specific works and specific ideas that each of the cast members has. Then, let them teach us. Then, bounce new ideas around. We think you're really going to like it. So, stay tuned for the rest of the year. This is going to be awesome.
[Mary Robinette] So, along those lines, one of the things that we're going to be doing is we're going to be taking a work in using it as the spine of a series of episodes that explore ideas. So you can think of this year as having a certain aspect of book club. The first book that were going to be looking at is in February. That's… We're going to be doing a deep dive on my novel The Spare Man. That's going to be full of spoilers. Just want to be very, very clear about this. That we are going to… I am going to spoil the heck out of this book as we talk about the choices that I made and how. Then we'll use that to talk about how you can use tension, how you structure murder mysteries. There's going to be a lot of things that are going to come out of that, using it as an example. So, before you get to February, listen or read The Thin Man… The Spare Man by me, Mary Robinette Kowal. Then we'll give you warnings about what the other books are well in advance so that you can be prepared for those. It's not always going to be a book, don't worry. Sometimes it'll be a short story, sometimes it'll be something on the internets that we are like let's dig into this.
 
[Mary Robinette] All right. Now, homework?
[Dan] Yes.
[Mary Robinette] For your homework, as you've noticed, we have all been talking about who we are. Several of us, and the series, are talking about how we're reinventing. What I want you to do is I want you to look at your work. This is the beginning of a new year. Look at your work, look at your process, look at where you want to be. Think about an aspect that you want to reinvent. You don't have to reinvent everything. But, just one thing that you're like, "I want to try something different, I want to try something new." This is your opportunity to do that, so write that down. Then put it someplace where you can look at it every now and then, like this is a thing I'm going to try. All right. This has been Writing Excuses. You're out of excuses. Now go write.
 
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 Writing Excuses 17.23: Are We Stronger Together?
 
 
Key Points: It's a classic archetype or style of story, answering the question, are we stronger together. Start by looking at what story you are trying to tell. Not who is the story about. Be aware of the fun of character introductions, and the tendency to overdo them, leading to bloat. Don't try to answer the question are we stronger together just by splitting the ensemble and then bringing them back together, without adding something. There are other ways to answer that question, like the tin dog. Look for the desire for connection as part of the ensemble. If you break up the ensemble, pair them up in new ways. Make sure we are invested in the characters first. Think about how to bring in a new member, a new character, as part of the ensemble.
 
[Season 17, Episode 23]
 
[Dan] This is Writing Excuses, Are We Stronger Together?
[Zoraida] 15 minutes long.
[Kaela] Because you're in a hurry.
[Howard] And we're not that smart.
[Dan] I'm Dan.
[Zoraida] I'm Zoraida.
[Kaela] I'm Kaela.
[Howard] I'm pretty sure we're definitely smarter together.
[Laughter]
[Zoraida] I would agree with that.
[Dan] Definitely.
[[Zoraida] I agree with that.
[Kaela] Our powers combined...
 
[Dan] So, are we stronger together? This is kind of a classic, I guess, story archetype or style of story. Zoraida, when you put together the outline for the classes, you started this by asking the question, what is the story I'm trying to tell? Why is that the first thing we think about when we look at this concept of being stronger together?
[Zoraida] I think that… So the question is what is the story I'm trying to tell, as opposed to who is the story about. Right? So the distinction to me is the story itself is… Represents the internal life of my character. Right? So, like, my character has this rich internal life. Then everything around them is what they're reacting to. Identifying that part of the story really makes it easier for me to understand whether I have something that is an ensemble cast or whether I have a singular, let's just say, hero's journey of one person making their way around the world. So once I know, for example, my The Inheritance of Orquidea Divina is a multi-generational magical realism novel. I originally wrote the first draft with only the main character, her name is Marimar. It was only her. As I wrote the story, once I identified that this story is about the entire family and not just one person in a family, I added the different points of view. That came with revision, obviously. But first I needed to identify this story is bigger than one person. That change the entire scope of how I was telling it.
[Dan] Absolutely. Has anyone else come across the same issue before? Figuring out what story you're trying to tell?
[Kaela] Yes. So the sequel for Cece Rios and The Desert of Souls, it comes out in September, it's dual point of view versus the first one, which was just singular point of view. That's because the story I was trying to tell, I realized there was no way to have Cece and her sister in the same place at the same time without it changing the point of… A large part of the story for both of them. So I was like, "Wow, I'm going to have to add another point of view here, because it's just a bigger story." Their stories connect and what I like to think is a nice important way. But that, it was too big for a single point of view. I'm currently drafting the third book, and let me tell you, I'm also still wondering whether I need to add another point of view to that. So, the revision and writing process is filled with many questions like this.
[Dan] Yeah, with my cyberpunk series, I had this same question pop up, and realized the story I was trying to tell was a heist. All three books in the trilogy ultimately are heist stories, because that's what got me really excited. That meant that they needed to turn into ensemble stories. Which is not necessarily what I set out to do, but heists really require that. Because you need to have all the different specialists and they each have their own thing they can do that no one else can do. Then that turned into a big team dynamic story, and then eventually, in later books, turned into a family dynamic story. Because I was… As I changed which characters I was focusing on. But because of the story I was trying to tell, that really did force me into a specific type of cast.
 
[Zoraida] I think that one of the things that I encounter a lot when I'm writing… One of my favorite things to write, and as a reader or consumer of media generally, is character introductions. I just… I die for them. I'm like, "Yes! Introduce another one. I don't care that there's 200 people in the cast already. Give me another one." Which is something I have to also control about myself, because my editor's like, "Do you need another person though?" I'm like, "But they're cool." And he's like, "Yeah, but do you need them?"
[chuckles]
[Zoraida] I think that's…
[Kaela] Well… Yeah. I mean, I feel like I've had situations where… I've had to cut entire characters out of books because I'm like, "Okay, you're dead weight. The… Another character… Two other characters are doing the exact same thing." I just want… I just thought it would be funny to have, like, a talking dog. Not really. Like, that's…
[Chuckles]
[Kaela] I don't think I've ever had a talking dog in my books.
[Chuckles]
[Kaela] But, for example…
[Chuckles]
[Kaela] Right? That's sort of what I was thinking, like, if you look at, again, the Fast and Furious movies, they all work stronger together. Because you can't... well, you can rob a car by yourself, but you can't rob like 17 cars by yourself.
[Chuckles]
[Kaela] So it is… The question is, and that's where the dynamic comes in, can you trust everybody on your team? Right? What happens in Avengers Civil War or Captain America Civil War when all of a sudden our ensemble is broken. Right? Because two sides are… There's a line in the sand is drawn.
[Dan] Yeah. Comic books are such a great use of this particular thing. The X-Men in particular. The X-Men is absolutely a group that falls into this we are stronger together kind of archetype. Because their powers are so unique and often so strange, like Jubilee or Dazzler or some of these other strange kind of minor X-Men, you couldn't necessarily… They're not going to stop a bank robbery on their own. They're not going to stop any of the huger stories on their own, certainly. But put them all together and you have the one character who can make bright lights and the other character who can do this or other little minor thing, and together they can all do this… Overcome this big evil. But also, that starts falling into the same thing that Kaela was talking about. You go back to the 80s and 90s, Chris Claremont run of X-Men and they were introducing new characters constantly. Because it is really fun to think, "Okay, what if there was a character who had this cool power? Or was from this background?" You can really see him just kind of letting his imagination run wild and introducing more and more characters constantly, which can lead to bloat. That is what is really bogging down The Song of Ice and Fire series, because there's just more and more characters and we've got to give them all their weight and their time. It becomes a bigger and bigger house of cards with every new person that you add.
 
[Howard] A very common story structure for the ensemble, and I... we complained about it last week with one of the seasons of The Expanse and one of the seasons of Stranger Things, is that when you answer the question are we stronger together by splitting them apart…
[Chuckles]
[Howard] Then you bring them back together and it's wonderful for the audience because it's something we've all been waiting for. Boy, I'm here to tell you that I've seen enough of this… I've actually written enough of this, that it's not that cool all by itself. Also, there's other ways to ask that question. One of my favorite ensemble moments, the question of are we stronger together, is in an episode of Doctor Who, and I think it may have been David Tenon as the Doctor, I don't remember the name of the… Of Rose's friend, the goofy kind of dumb guy who ends up going along on some of their adventures. But at one point, he's got K-9… He's putting K-9 in the boot of a vehicle or something, and he says, "Oh, my gosh. I'm the tin dog."
[Chuckles]
[Howard] He has this realization that he doesn't belong on the team.
[Oh, wow]
[Howard] He's useless. He's the tin dog. It's such a… It's a fun, soul-searching moment, and it's the sort of thing you can do without breaking the ensemble up. You just have one of the characters have this realization I'm not helping, I don't think we're actually stronger together. I think you're better off if I stand over here and keep score. That's… The point here being we want to ask that question, are we stronger together, we want to answer it with a resounding yes. We can do it in ways other than just showing and they come back together and everybody goes rar and we win.
[Right! Yeah!]
 
[Dan] I've got a question I want to ask about this exact thing, but first, let's do book of the week. Kaela, you've been telling us about Cece Rios.
[Chuckles]
[Dan] You got a new book, book 2 in that series comes out. Tell us about it.
[Kaela] That's right. So, it's a sequel to the first book, obviously. That's how series work, I guess.
[Chuckles]
[Kaela] I'm so excited about this one. Like I mentioned earlier, it's dual point of view. You get Cece's adventure and you get her older sister Juana's adventure. The set up is that Juana has realized that part of her heart is missing. Her heartbeat… Her heart isn't beating, part of her soul is missing, and it's stuck in Devil's Alley. In order to get it, she has to go in by herself. Cece tries to go on an adventure to go get it herself, first, but Juana goes instead in secret because she wants to fix it herself. She's tired of being saved by her little sister.
[Chuckles]
[Kaela] They go on a wild adventure. She ends up teaming up, Juana ends up teaming up with Lion, diving into Devil's Alley on their own. Cece begins to uncover some secrets about dark criaturas, how they were made, and maybe even her curandera powers. Woo hoo. For anyone who's read the first one, context. Yeah, I'm really excited about it. It's going to be taking a lot of the themes of the first one and going deeper with them and giving some nice resolution for the pretty hard things that Juana went through in the first book. We get a little bit more context about what happened and how she's dealing with it. So… Oh, yeah, then of course, the big hook. We end up meeting and facing the king of Devil's Alley himself, the king of fears, El Cucuy. So… Very proud of that.
[Dan] Awesome. That is the title of the book, Cece Rios and the King of Fears. Remind us of the title of the first one, again, if people want to start at the beginning.
[Kaela] Cece Rios and the Desert of Souls.
[Dan] Desert of Souls. By Kaela Rivera. Go out and grab those now. You can get the first one, the second one is up for preorder, I hope.
[Kaela] Yes.
[Dan] But it comes out this fall. So, anyway, great.
 
[Dan] Let's get back to this question then. So, let's talk about this idea of are we stronger together, and then how season two or book 2 or whatever breaks that group apart. In something like Stranger Things, while we have complained about oh, no, but I wanted to keep my team together, I love the ensemble interaction, it was ultimately a very satisfying story the way they told that. Compare that to something like the TV show Heroes. Where season one was let's bring the team together, are we stronger together, yes, we are. In the end, the final episode, they're able to defeat the big bad guy. Then, season two, they broke them apart and told that same story of coming back together and it was not satisfying. It was frustrating. What is the difference? What makes that, that kind of severing the team, how can we tell that in a way that works versus what are the pitfalls that make that not work?
[Oh.]
[Dan] It's a hard question to just throw right in your faces, because it's not in the outline.
[Howard] In the…
[Chuckles]
[Howard] In the Joss Whedon Justice League… Might have been in the Zack Snyder as well, I don't remember because that one was way long… When they introduce Flash, Bruce Wayne says, "I'm putting together a team." Flash says, "Nn, I'm in." "I haven't even told you what…" "Nn, I need friends."
[Chuckles]
[Howard] Flash's desire to connect is what, for me, held that whole team together. I think our desire for connection is what draws us into an ensemble. If you break that ensemble apart, you are taking away my friends. Stop that. You're a bad person.
[Chuckles]
[Kaela] I think that… Like, I'm actually okay with breaking up ensembles. But…
[Gasp]
[Kaela] Like, you have…
[Chuckles]
[Kaela] Howard just decries my name for the rest of my life. But I feel like you have to do it in a way that's giving you more dimension that you wouldn't have another way. Like… Okay, once again, cartoons. Duck Tales.
[Laughter]
[Kaela] But the new version.
[Yoo hoo!]
[Kaela] The new version of duck [garbled] Ooo-hoo! So, like, towards the last season of it, there was a whole episode where everyone had to split up because there was multiple things they had to get. Right? They paired them up in some really unexpected ways. Like, they had Lena, who is one of the magic characters, who is best friends with Webby, and then they had Huey… Huey, Dewey, Louie… Yeah, Huey. I'd never seen those characters together. So I was suddenly like, "Wow, what in the world are they going to be up to?" It was fascinating the way that being with Lena ended up helping Huey through his whole… His last character arc thing that he needed to get through. I was like, "That was so unexpected and satisfying." That, like seeing… Sorry, go ahead.
 
[Zoraida] No, I was going to say, like the unexpected part. I mean, when I first watched Lord of the Rings, everybody starts off together and then they break apart into different groups. I think I'm okay with things like that. Where it's like we have now… We're delegating. Right? Everyone has different tasks. You go to Mordor. You go over here. You'll get some allies. But that has to happen after pre-establishing a big win, or why we are here together, why we are a collective. Then… Because then, when you break it apart, when somebody dies, it is that much more impactful because we have invested. As a reader and a viewer, like once I'm invested in characters, I feel like they're somebody I know. That's really the goal for me, like, creating characters like that.
[Dan] Yeah. I think, for me, what makes something like Fellowship or Duck Tales work, these places where they have broken the fellowship, they've split the ensemble, and it still works, is that they're using it as an opportunity to tell some new stories, to combine characters in a new way. Community was great at this. You very rarely got for example, a Jeff Winger and a… Now I can't remember Yvette Nicole Brown's character. They rarely had stories together. But when they did, it was fascinating because of how rare it was. It was like, "Oh, this is a side of them I have never seen before, because they bring out different qualities in each other."
[Howard] The foosball episode.
[Dan] You compare that against something like the second season of Heroes or the fourth season of Arrested Development where they weren't really doing anything new. They were… Second season of Heroes was the exact same story as the first season of Heroes. They're apart, and they're going to come together over time. So they weren't using that as an opportunity to reveal new things about the characters or to delve into new aspects of who they are as people. So it… I think that's really the separation.
[Howard] Yeah. That's… That feels like the crux of my complaint, is that if you're doing it just to answer the question are we stronger together, yes we are, look, because we came back together, everybody's happier, and our readers, our viewers, like it more. That's just formula. That's just canned green beans. But if you give us something fresh, if we're exploring new story bits, then I'm okay with it. Like with Fellowship, we still had an ensemble. We still had Legolas and Aragorn and Gimli as a small ensemble. So…
 
[Zoraida] Yeah, they're just like [bigapeas?] One thing I want to add is, like, also once you have all these great casts and ensembles established, right? And they're stronger together, what happens when you bring in a foreign entity? Right? Like, there's this episode of Friends where they are all hanging out at the apartment, and then somebody knocks on the door. They're like counting each other. They're like, "Well, we're all here. So who is at the door? Who has come to interrupt our carefully curated space base?" Right? Of course, it's Rachel's sister or somebody who like brings in chaos, and then creates tension in the group.
[Dan] Yeah. I think ultimately that's why so many people consider the ending of How I Met Your Mother to be unsatisfying is because they couldn't figure out how to solve that problem. They had built, over six or seven seasons, this really strong ensemble cast with the fundamental promise of we're going to add a new character to this eventually. They never really were able to. I thought that Cristin Milioti did a phenomenal job as the mother…
[Yes]
[Dan] When she finally appears at the end. But the writers didn't really know what to do with her, how to bring her in, how to disrupt those ensemble mechanics in a way that let her really feel like she was part of it. So they eventually, I think, kind of took the coward's way out and wrote her out and went with Anne what's her name. But…
 
[Dan] Anyway. We have let this episode run just a little long. We've got homework. Kaela, this is your homework this week.
[Kaela] Yes. Okay. So, both practically and in a way that should help your writing generally, I want you to sit down. Take out a piece of paper. And, like, an actual pen. Physically. You could also do this digitally. But, like, try it. Create a connection map for your characters. This will both help you keep track of everybody, but it will also help you understand how they interact with everybody in the group. So, make connections between like… Describe first what their relationships to each other are, like, each person. What their relationship to each other person in your ensemble is. Then, one challenge in that relationship. Then, one way they enhance each other, or have an interesting something. It might not be enhancing sometimes. You don't know. But you'll find out that way.
[Dan] All right. This is Writing Excuses. You are out of excuses. Now go write.
 
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Writing Excuses Season Three Episode Nine: Attending Cons

From http://www.writingexcuses.com/2009/07/26/writing-excuses-season-3-episode-9-attending-conventions-part-i/

Key points: First of Two Parts! Conferences are for training, conventions are for fanning. Tradeshows/Expos are for industry, and media cons are exhibitions. For an aspiring writer, conventions provide inexpensive introductions and networking, while conferences provide intensive training at a cost. Details of what to do to make cons useful to you...next week.
Cons-arned details? )
[Dan] Wait, we need a writing prompt, don't we?
[Brandon] I don't know, it's a two-part episode.
[Jordan] Give them half of the writing prompt now.
[Brandon] Oh, half the writing prompt. OK, half your writing prompt...
[Howard] The protagonist has shown up at a convention and in his pocket he has a ...
[Dan] See you next week.

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