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Writing Excuses 16.5: Pros and Contracts
 
 
Key Points: What's in a contract? And what do publishers try to slip in that shouldn't be there? First, for novels, contracts in the US are usually for life of copyright. Short fiction is first printing. Around the world, audiobooks, it may be a certain amount of time, with renewals. Do look for the reversion clause, too! Try to raise the threshold of sales. It should not include perpetual irrevocable rights. Second, watch for ancillary rights. Exactly what rights is the publisher buying. In the US, for books, North American English rights, and maybe North American Spanish rights. If they are strong in the UK, you may want to sell world English rights. Be prepared for the publisher to want audio rights, too. You should try to keep translation rights, film rights, and stage rights. Shared worlds are different. Tie-ins and work for hire are also different. If you want a lawyer to look at the contract, make sure it is someone who is familiar with literary entertainment contracts. Finally, expect to have a right of first refusal clause, but avoid noncompete clauses. Make the right of first refusal as narrow as possible. Also, avoid signing away your series rights. Do try to include a clause making the contract binding on successors, assigns, and heirs. Try to strike any noncompete clauses, or at least get a narrow definition of what a competing work is.
 
[Season 16, Episode 5]
 
[Dan] This is Writing Excuses, Pros and Contracts.
[Mary Robinette] 15 minutes long.
[Brandon] Because you're in a hurry.
[Erin] And we're not that smart.
[Dan] I'm Dan.
[Mary Robinette] I'm Mary Robinette.
[Brandon] I'm Brandon.
[Erin] I'm Erin.
 
[Dan] We are going to be talking today about contracts. This will be the deepest dive we can do in the next 15 to 18 minutes about what does a publishing contract actually look like, what does it involve, and what do you need to look out for.
[Brandon] Yeah. A lot of these things are just… It's interesting because on one hand, publishing contracts are fairly standard. Right? There's a standardization and there's certain things that are in them. Our industry has been around longer than any of the other major entertainment industries. Because of that, the contracts kind of have been around a lot longer and they've been refined. But at the same time, things consistently get… Publishers try to slip things in consistently that they should not be putting into those contracts. Beyond that, there is some legalese to how a contract looks like that when I got my first one, I was glad that I had an agent to go through and explain it all to me. So I thought we would take a week, an episode, and just talk about what some of these things are and what they look like and hopefully make them less intimidating to writers as they are hopefully getting given some of these contracts. So let's go ahead and start with the things that are generally in a publishing contract. This is one thing I would say that… The first thing is, in America, unfortunately, contracts are usually for life of copyright for novel contracts with big publishers. I don't know how it works in short fiction. Mary Robinette, is this common? Is it going to be life of copyright also? Like, I would assume it has to be so they can keep the magazine in print forever.
[Mary Robinette] Well, so the interesting… One of the interesting things is that they'll get the right for the first printing, but then it's usually specified very clearly in the contract that they get to print it in that one magazine and that is the only place that they get to use it. If they want to do an anthology, they have to come back to you.
[Brandon] Yeah.
[Mary Robinette] Which allows you to sell reprints. You do not get to sell reprints with novels.
[Brandon] You don't. This is… This was… This was something that was fine in previous eras because novels went out of print when it became too expensive to warehouse copies and sell a few enough copies. So if your sales declined, you got the book back. You could then sell it again and hopefully get a relaunch of things like that. Modern contracts, because of the way epublishing works, a lot of books just never go out of print by those old things. So it is a big kind of source of contention with a lot of the indy published people that they don't like the idea that it's life of copyright. I think that's a valid argument to be making, but it is standard in the industry. It's not standard in, for instance, the UK. All of my contracts around the world get renewed very commonly as they run out after a certain amount of time. This happens in Germany. We just renewed with one of the publishers there. It happens often in audiobooks. My audiobook in America just came up and we had a chance to renew the contract or not. So the only really big place that I have life of copyright is the main place in the main contracts that I do which is with New York. But that is not a thing that you see and should raise red flags in that you're getting taken advantage of or rather we're all getting taken advantage of and perhaps as authors we should try stamping this out, but it is a common thing in contracts to see.
[Mary Robinette] Yeah.
[Brandon] The next thing that's going to be in there is it's going to…
[Mary Robinette] Can I…
[Brandon] Go ahead, Mary Robinette.
 
[Mary Robinette] Oh, just life of copyright. One thing that I wanted to mention with that is that there is something called a reversion clause. A reversion clause is that if your publisher doesn't meet certain conditions, the threshold of sales, payments… There's a number of different things, that the rights will revert back to you. It's very important to make sure that your contract has a reversion clause so that there is a mechanism by which you can reclaim those rights.
[Brandon] As I said before, this is harder to have happen than it used to be. Maybe what you should be doing is raising those thresholds of sales that they need to meet. Some of my early contracts, which are still in force, right? Because I signed them before the e-book revolution happened, but they knew enough to get e-books in there. So they are for e-books. Say we have to sell, like, 50 copies or something like that. Which is just… They can put it on sale on Amazon for $0.99, and even if you're not a big author, they can sell that threshold. The old thresholds no longer are really… They really don't work anymore. But a lot of the contracts still have the old thresholds. So watching what your reversion language is and trying to get better reversion language is well worth your time. I got books back from Scholastic after… We weren't pleased with how they were doing there. But unfortunately, because of this language, there was no chance they would ever revert. Because my name is big enough that sales would trickle in, and they would get those 50 or 100 copies per pay period. So I had to write a big fat check to just buy them back, to get them back. Which is something you can also do.
[Dan] Yeah. That's what I had to do with audio rights for Active Memory, the third book in my cyberpunk series. Harper had the audio rights, but chose not to bring the third one to audio. So I eventually, after several years of arguing with them, just bought the rights back. I haven't had a chance to do anything with them yet. But I did not have a good reversion clause and they were able to sit on them for several years doing nothing.
[Mary Robinette] Yeah. In short fiction, you're going to be looking… The… Some of the language that you're looking for is making sure that it doesn't ask for perpetual irrevocable rights. Because if… And we've seen this happen before, unfortunately, in short fiction… If the market does something and you no longer want to be associated with that market, you may want to be able to pull your story from it. So you want to make sure that your contract has a good way to get out.
[Erin] Yeah. Or if the market goes on hiatus… Sometimes the market goes on hiatus and doesn't seem to ever be coming out, it's good to have something in your back pocket. I think one of the things to be aware of with short fiction is that it can feel… Like, you've already written the story, and the contract usually comes to you after. They're like, "We are going to take your story. Here is the contract." So it can feel like it's a done deal. Like there's no way anything could go wrong. But there's always a chance. Murphy's Law. So it's always good to have a plan and a contract that maybe you don't end up needing, but you still have it if you do.
 
[Brandon] So, another one of these things that you really want to pay attention to is what we call ancillary rights. It's sometimes listed in different ways in contracts, but you can find it by… Them… The contracts should limit what rights the publisher is purchasing. Meaning, for most cases for book contracts, you should be selling in America, North American English rights and maybe North American Spanish rights, are the extent and the full extent of what you should be selling, with the asterisks of some UK publishers that have US arms have a strong UK publishing arm, and in some cases, you may want to sell them your world English rights. That's like, for instance, Orbit in the US, it's very hard to not sell them world English, because they're a UK company that has started up a US arm in the last 15 years. They are acquiring for both of those. The other big one that has the asterisk on it is audiobook rights. Audio rights are worth big money now. They didn't used to be. When I broke into the business, audio rights, you would sell several dozen copies to libraries. Now, as I spoke about, my audio rights are almost 50% of my business. So publishers have certain mandates of, now that audio has become such a big deal, to not buy things without audio rights. You're going to have a fight if you want to keep your audio rights. It still can be done, but it's getting harder and harder and harder. But they should not be taking our translation rights, any film rights, or any stage rights. They will…
[Dan] There are some outlets right now, like, I know SerialBox insists on film rights as part of their thing.
[Brandon] Oh, really. Oh, well, they're doing…
[Dan] Yeah, I just learned that a couple of days ago, actually. I was very surprised.
[Mary Robinette] They are…
[Brandon] Aren't they doing [garbled] story things, though, on SerialBox a lot?
[Mary Robinette] Yeah, it's a shared world. So their model is much… Their contract model is somewhat different than standard. It is also, because it is a shared world, there are things where you are unlikely to be able to sell those rights on your own anyway because you're a chapter in a novel.
[Brandon] Yes. Shared rights are a different thing and tie-in things and things like that. Like, when I sign a contract for the Wheel of Time, I was not looking at most of these things that we're talking about right now, because that was work for hire. That's it. That's a completely different ballgame. But your publisher, if you sell traditionally, is going to try, in my experience, to keep the film rights. All this means to them is… The film rights for authors generally, in my experience, cell because somebody in Hollywood reads a book, decides it's hot, and offers to buy it. I have very rarely been able to go to Hollywood in pitch something and sell it. You can. It does happen. But most of the time, they are coming to you. So if your publisher keeps the film rights, all it is is free money for them. Because the film rights will be 50-50 split between you and the publisher. The publisher… The personal come to you and say, "Hey, we want to option this." You'll be like, "Oh, the publisher has the film rights." They will go to the publisher and give them the same deal they were going to offer you and the publisher will send you half the money. You should not sell anything that gives these rights to the publisher on an author created property. It's gotta be one of your first lines you don't cross is that and translation rights.
[Dan] It used to be very common in YA, for some of the big publishers, such as HarperCollins, to retain film rights and then market them aggressively. Aprilynne Pike, for example, when Wings came out, she had sold film rights to Disney before the book even came out because Harper was doing such a great job of marketing those. I don't think that they still do that. I don't know exactly how that has changed over the last eight years.
[Brandon] I will say that Joshua sold film rights on Alcatraz before the book came out and I got all the money and Scholastic didn't get any. So if you have a good agent, that's also… That also can happen. Often times, an author will have… Their agent will have a relationship with an agent in Hollywood. Hollywood's a completely different world. But a lot of times, you can have an agent in Hollywood who is as aggressively marketing things as the publisher. But I will take that as say… As a sign that rule number one is whatever Brandon or anybody tells you is going to have exceptions. It's only going to be the experience of that one author. In my experience, none of my publishers have done a good job of ever doing anything with any of their film rights that they've had from other authors I've known at those publishers.
 
[Mary Robinette] Something that you mentioned that I just want to jump in on, because you said Hollywood is completely different. It is important to understand that each area has their own terms of art. So when you are looking for someone to represent you, you want to make sure that you've got someone… Like, these… If you take a publishing contract and you show it to a contract lawyer in any other field, they will look at it like you are high and why would you sign this thing?
[Brandon] Yep.
[Mary Robinette] But these are terms of art that are understood within the industry, and if you… And would be handled appropriately if anything came to litigation. So you want to make sure that you are dealing with an entertainment lawyer if you are having a lawyer look over your things. Your agent should be familiar with these things and not worried. You should be fine. But if you are a belt and suspenders person who wants to have a lawyer look over it, make sure that they're an entertainment lawyer. Specifically, make sure that there someone who knows how to handle literature, because that is different from film.
 
[Dan] Awesome. Let's pause now for our book of the week, which, Mary Robinette, you are going to tell us about Middlegame.
[Mary Robinette] Middlegame by Seanan McGuire is this wicked twisty tale. I want to tell you so little about it, and also want you to read it, so we can shout at each other about it. I didn't know what the conceit was when I went in, and when I figured it out, it was so cool. So it's… It is again, it is about family, it is about magic, alchemy is real, and it's really, really good and will keep you guessing. I blew a deadline finishing this book.
[Dan] Fantastic.
[Mary Robinette] Middlegame by Seanan McGuire.
[Dan] Thank you very much.
 
[Dan] All right. I wanted to ask Brandon when you were talking about ancillary rights, are you inclu… Is this a good time to talk about international rights, or is that…
[Brandon] Yeah.
[Dan] Coming up?
[Brandon] Nope. That's part of this discussion. So, for those who don't know, we have talked about it on the podcast before. The way that translation rights work for books… I'm not sure so much on short stories, but for books is you will sell the rights separately in each country and usually your agent will have a relationship with agents around the world. A sign that an agent is a good agent is that they will have these established relationships with other agencies in the local languages and those agencies will take all the books that the US agent acquires, and then try to sell them locally to their markets. This is really a great, an important source of income, for a lot of newer novelists who've just broken in. I know that I lived on some of these foreign rights sales back when I couldn't make a living just off of my US sales. I know Dan had a similar experience, that this can be the difference between going full time and not going full-time, is making some of this money. A lot of the agencies consider it a mark of pride that they're able to do this and to sell rights around the world for their authors. It doesn't happen for everyone. One of the things you have to understand is if it's not happening for you, there are some times where certain genres just do not sell as well internationally as other genres do. This is very common, for instance, in humor. Humor is so focused… It's so much harder to sell a humor piece in another language, because a lot of the humor just doesn't work. Local countries have their own sense… Styles of humor. But it is something you should try… You should retain in your contracts, regardless. Because you might as well have the shot at it of selling internationally.
[Dan, Erin] Yeah, and…
[Dan] Go ahead, please.
[Erin] I was going to say in short fiction, I think one of the big differences in short fiction and novels is that unless you have an agent anyway, because you write novels in addition, in short fiction, like, you're a one-person shop. You're your own agent, publish… You're dealing with… You're reading your own contracts and they're a lot shorter and easier to look at, although it is a good way to learn some of these terms of art because you have to look at everything yourself. But I will say that I've had short stories published in three or four languages, and actually what happens is, as long as you retain the right to do it, usually in short fiction, people will come to you and say, like, "I like your story," and, like, "I'm Italian and I want to translate it into Italian and give you a little bit of money." I'm like, "Yeah. Why not?" So long as you have the rights, then, you can say yes. So it's just something to check off and make sure that your… I think there's one or two magazines that do hold other language rights, but most will allow you to work directly with somebody in another country or translate into another language.
[Mary Robinette] You can actually pitch your stories… Submit your stories to foreign-language markets, which is a good way to start to build an audience. There's a couple of different databases out there of markets, foreign-language markets. One of the interesting things… Hello, colonialism… Is that when stories are going out of the US into another market, they will take responsibility for translating it. When stories are coming from another country into the US, the author usually has to translate it. There's a couple of different markets in the US that do translate. That is starting to shift. But for a very long time, we were really export only.
[Dan] I just wanted to say that, for me, because a ton… I would say a majority of my business is non-English, mostly Germany, and Latin America, but several others as well. Sometimes that does translate into significant money. I lived on Germany, and in fact in Germany, for several years. Latin America, on the other hand, while my books are huge there, I don't get a lot of money from there. But I still get… This goes back to what Mary Robinette talks about with shininess. The opportunity to travel to Peru or to Argentina or to Budapest or to any of these countries where my books are big but there's not a lot of money is still worth it to me. Because that is a cherished experience and I've got good friends and that shininess really comes into play there.
[Mary Robinette] Yeah. I just got the Japanese translations of The Calculating Stars. It's in two volumes. Their tiny and adorable and I love them so much…
[Brandon] Oh, man.
[Mary Robinette] And can't read them at all.
[Brandon] Japanese books are the best. The translations. They're so good. And here's just a little tidbit. Science fiction sells better in Japan than fantasy. So keep an eye on your selling to Japan if you have a science fiction book. Science fiction by foreigners sells better than fantasy by foreigners, let me state it that way.
[Mary Robinette] Yeah.
 
[Brandon] There is one other major topic I want to get to. We're going to kind of skip over royalties and advances. These are talked about quite a bit more. It's easier to find things about them. And indeed, there are some standardization's there. My royalties on my books change very little between my first published books and my later published books, because of some of these standardizations and things like that. However, one area I really want to cover is right of first refusal and noncompetition clauses. A few years back, all the major publishers started inserting really egregious noncompetition clauses into their contracts. I remember SFWA raising a big storm about it before I got one. I'm like, "Hey, this is what they were talking about." This is something that, as I talked to my agent, he said, "They try to do this periodically. A new boilerplate is made by the publisher that is what they're going to give to everybody. Then everybody throws a fit about it and gets the noncompetition clauses pulled out of them. Then they wait a few years, and they try it again." What they're trying to do here is to make it harder for an author to walk away from a publisher once that author has gotten very popular, and that author has been able to demand better terms by playing the field then they would be when they're a new author just writing their first books. So, they try very hard… This happens in our local market here in Utah, there are some regional presses that have had… In the past, have had very egregious noncompetition clauses because they're really worried about this. This is where the the thing we talk about, where the publisher is not your friend, comes into play. They will try to keep ahold of you and they will tell you… The publisher will tell you, "We're family. We want to be in the business together. That's why we're putting these sorts of things in there." When it's just going to limit your options later on. So you want to watch. It is all right to have a right of first refusal clause. It's very common. But you want it to be as narrow as possible. They will start with a "We have right of first refusal on your next work, whatever it is." You may be an academic writer who also publishes. That right of first refusal technically means that your fiction publisher gets to see your next dissertation piece on something. You should limit that right of first refusal on, if you can get it down to, the next book in the series you're writing. That is the ideal place for it to be for you as an author. Often, you can only get it down to your next work in the same media, meaning your next book for adults or your next epic fantasy book or something like that.
[Mary Robinette] Yeah. I think mine is something like… With… One of the things that I remember with The Glamorous Histories was that it was the next work of adult historical fantasy. So I could do other fantasy, not historical. To someone else, I mean.
[Brandon] That's an example of a really good clause. That's an agent who got a good clause put in there. To explain right of first refusal, this means that you have to show the book to your current publisher first, and basically, they get the first crack at making an offer and things like that. It doesn't mean you eventually have to take that offer. You can then go play the field and take it to other publishers and things like that. I'm not sure how the litigation plays out. I've been told sometimes that if you take a really bad deal from another publisher and your publisher has offered a much better deal, that could get you into a tricky legal situation. That's a question for an agent, not for me. But the reason right of first refusal is all right in this case is because if something is doing really poorly at your publisher, then you still have that option to go somewhere else with the rest of the series. The ones you really want to watch out for are clauses that let the publisher own the series rights. You should never sign this unless it's a work for hire or a series pitched by the publisher. Because then you could have a big falling out, walk away, and they own your characters. You'd say, "Wow. No. That clause would never be in a contract." I've seen that clause in multiple contracts.
[Mary Robinette] Yep.
[Brandon] Sent to authors. Never to me. But I have seen that clause before.
[Mary Robinette] Yeah. Can I say one other clause that I want to encourage people to make sure is in their contract? It's something that shouldn't need to be in there. That's a clause that says that the contract signing is binding on the successors, assigns, and heirs, or at least successors and assigns. What this means is that if a giant publishing house gobbles up another publishing house, that all of the terms of your contract are still binding on the new publishing house. That they don't get to mess around, they still have to owe you all of the things that you were originally owed. They're still obligated to pay you.
[Brandon] [garbled] something related to a current thing in the news right now, regarding contracts [garbled]
[Mary Robinette] As we're recording this, we're in the middle of something called Disney must pay. We're talking to Disney about Alan Dean Foster. But it's not just Disney. There's… We're seeing this kind of thing happen in comics and a lot and other places. So, in US copyright law, unless there is something in the deal memo between the two companies that by each other, or one of them buys the other, that says, "Company A, you're still responsible for all of the obligations. We are in fact just buying the rights, but you're going to take care of all the obligations." Unless that language is in there, the way copyright law in the US is understood is that if you take on a contract, you also take on all of the obligations for that. That said, it is… What lawyers do is they take words and they make them mean the opposite of what they look like they mean. So having the successors and assigns in there is really a belt and suspenders kind of thing, but it makes it unequivocal. The other thing that it does is that it protects your heirs as well. So that when you pass, it makes it very clear that these rights go to your heirs. That's… Rather than leaving your book in limbo.
 
[Brandon] The last little topic on this is the noncompete causes. Mary Robinette, have you seen these during your tenure at SFWA pop up and things, where… These are language where the publisher will say, "The author won't write a competing work for another publisher while this contract is still in force." Things like that.
[Mary Robinette] We do see that. Like, I've seen them attempt to do that in my own contracts. The… Again, the way it's… The way we suggest approaching it is… First of all, get it struck, but if you can't, at least get it defined narrowly about what a competing work looks like.
[Brandon] Yeah. They showed up in my contracts and we did get it struck. But only after… It was like the fourth round of complaining about it that they took it out. These sorts of things… Noncompete is all very vague. As I understand it, like, there's lots of… [Garbled] there's a lot of baggage to noncompete in various legal terms and things. I'm not a lawyer. This is not legal advice. But I would say be very careful about these clauses if that makes sense.
[Dan] Yeah. I have been burned by a noncompete in the past where I had to give up like none agreed upon YA contract because I learned that one of my other YA contracts included a noncompete, and I had to walk away from a deal, which was really painful. One thing, as you're thinking about this, and you're thinking, "Well, if the publisher is really just trying to earn my loyalty and keep me in house," just tell yourself, they're asking you to accept these contractual obligations to not work with another publisher. They would absolutely refuse any contractual obligation that prevented them from working with a different author. So if it doesn't go both ways, it's not really fair. Anyway, we need to wrap up. So, this has been really valuable, though, and I'm glad that we gave it the time that it needs, because aspiring authors need to know this stuff. Especially if it's the first contract you've ever seen.
 
[Dan] So, anyway, let's get some homework from Brandon.
[Brandon] Right. I'm going to let Mary Robinette jump in, too, because SFWA has a model contract that you can look through. Kind of familiarize yourself with some of these terms, and also to see what a good contract should look like. So, your homework is going to go to find these. Now, Mary Robinette, you said that there are… We know that there is a pretty new one focusing on model magazine contracts. We'll have that in the liner notes. Some of their novel ones are a little older, isn't that correct?
[Mary Robinette] That's right. The… You can find the archived samples on the SFWA site, which are from 1989 and include things about microfiche and whether or not you need to print out your manuscript. They are extremely old model contracts and are interesting as historical curiosities. The magazine contract is up-to-date. But more specifically, SFWA also has a contracts committee which looks at contracts and evaluates them for good practices. So if you are a SFWA member, that's something that you can absolutely take advantage of. The other thing… I'm going to plug my own Patreon. I got permission to step through one of my contracts, all the way through, clause by clause, for my Patreon supporters. That is recorded up there. I can't share it with the general Internet, but I did get permission to do it for my Patreon supporters. So if you want to see a contract and have someone walk you all the way through a 38 page novel contract, I have one that I can walk you through. Or that I did walk you through.
[Dan] Great. That is a really cool resource. I need to support you on Patreon, it sounds like.
[Laughter]
[Dan] Anyway. This has been Writing Excuses.
[Mary Robinette] There's a certain amount of me going, "I don't know what that clause is."
[Laughter]
[Dan] You are out of excuses, now go write.
 
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Writing Excuses 15.37: Writing Under Deadlines
 
 
Key Points: Writing to contracted deadlines is hard. Sophomore slump! Writing in a bubble. It gets worse! New level, new devil. Train yourself to write against deadlines. Train your good habits. Build sustainability. Watch out for the year and a half deadline -- you need to work consistently at the start, to avoid crunch time at the end. Remember you won't have a boss. Pay attention to your own nuances. Make time to have a flat tire. Watch out for the other cooks in the kitchen! As your career grows, more things take time away. Learn to juggle early! Build a trunk full of pieces to use. Being good at deadlines, able to juggle multiple projects, means you will always have work. Learn to make your own schedule. 
 
[Mary Robinette] Season 15, Episode 37.
[Brandon] This is Writing Excuses, Writing under Deadlines.
[Victoria] 15 minutes long.
[Dan] Because you're in a hurry.
[Howard] And we're in a hurry, too.
[Brandon] I'm Brandon.
[Victoria] I'm Victoria.
[Dan] I'm Dan.
[Howard] I've gotta go. I've got writing to do.
[Chuckles]
 
[Brandon] I'm not sure if we ever even talked about this before. Maybe briefly. But I don't think we've ever had an entire episode on writing to deadline. Which is something we should totally do, because, I don't know about the rest of you, but the first time I had a contract, I was surprised by how much harder it was to write under someone else's deadline than my own goals.
[Victoria] Yes. I think this is called the sophomore slump for a reason. The first book you write usually is not under contract. If you're lucky enough to get a contract, and the contract extends for more than that book, the next book you write will be the first book that you write under contract. I say that it's like going from riding in a cave to going into writing in a bubble. Where all of a sudden, everyone can see you, and everyone has a stake in it, and everyone's watching you, and you no longer have unlimited time, you have give or take six months. It is one of the most trial-by-fire processes. It's one of the reasons that second book hits so many people so hard. Because second book… All books are difficult, but the first book you write under contract is an eye-opener.
[Brandon] For me, I had two big distinct moments like this. The first was writing my first book under deadline. The second was when I had The Wheel of Time. Suddenly, a lot more eyes were on me. I'm glad I was able to step into that. That I… My early books were not as… I was a brand-new author. They did fine, but it was when I suddenly had everyone at the company, at the publisher, focused all of their attention on me, that suddenly writing under that deadline was a very different experience.
[Victoria] Well, that's the horrifying thing, right? If any of you out there are writing your first book under deadline, it's only going to get so much worse…
[Chuckles]
[Victoria] Because you're still a new author. That first book you write under deadline feels like… Much like when you're a teenager and everything feels like a 10 or like the end of the world. That first book you write under deadline, you feel like it's never going to be this hard again. Until something else… My agent would say, "New level, new devil." The idea that every time you step up a level or into a new spot, you have that same sophomore horror reaction again at a new hurdle.
 
[Brandon] I think a lot of our listeners will, again… I say this a lot… Will be thinking, "Wow…"
[Howard] Luxury!
[Brandon] I know, wouldn't it be so nice?
[Dan] Wish I had that problem.
[Brandon] but I do think training yourself to write under deadline can be very helpful for preparing for a career in writing.
[Victoria] Absolutely
[Brandon] I've had many friends as writers hit this in it be really hard for them. A lot of times you'll find someone whose first book comes out and then there's a long gap to their second book. I'm not even talking about the famous examples that you might point to. A lot of my writer friends, one book came out, and then it's like four or five years til their next book. That's a really bad time to be making a big gap between books. Really bad time.
[Dan] So, when… Brandon and I were in writing groups together forever until he finally got published, and he got published a year, year and a half, two years before I did. So I watched this happen to you. I thought, "Okay, well, this is what I need to be ready for." Because as soon as you had a contract, then your time was not your own, and you were under all these other pressures. So I was trying to teach myself how to write. So I started setting my own deadlines. Because I knew this was coming. So that was, I guess, the first step, if we're going to give people advice. Give yourself an artificial deadline that you know is going to push you, that you know is going to be much harder than you want to deal with, and see what you can do with it.
[Brandon] This is part of why we like Nanowrimo and why… I did it years before I broke in. It was really helpful. For doing that first time I actually had a deadline to have practiced having deadlines.
[Howard] In the world of web cartooning, I made my entire career out of this deadline thing. Because I went 20 years without missing a daily update. There's this rolling deadline which says there will be a comic strip up every day. As we are recording this episode, that deadline, the inked buffer is only seven days out. Which is a terrible place for me to be, but I know, after 19 years of practice, I know exactly how long it takes to get out of this hole. Do I know exactly what I am going to write for the two weeks of scripts that I want to write and pencil and ink next week? No. But I've done this enough times that I am confident that if I focus myself on Monday and I look at my outline and I fall back on craft… Mary Robinette has talked about this a little bit, there are times when we just fall back on craft. It's not about inspiration, it's not about the Muses, it's chopping wood and carrying water. I know that I can do that. I just have to knuckle down and make it happen.
 
[Victoria] Part of this is a matter of training yourself into good habits. Because, as I said, it's only going to get harder. The better habits you can devise, the better habits that you can really start… Not perfecting, but creating for yourself early on, are really going to come in handy if you move farther into a career and you have multiple deadlines or multiple publishers or multiple anything. Really, like, they also come in handy if at any point you move from writing as hobby to writing part time or writing full-time. Every one of these habits about enforcing your own deadlines, finding accountabili-buddies, like finding a generational buddy, like finding anybody that you can really look to as support system and people to keep you accountable, these are key things for more sustainability of deadline.
[Dan] You have to decide at what point you want to add this. Because if you don't know how yet to write a book at all, you don't necessarily need to step up to this hard mode. Play easy mode first, because that's what it's for. But if you look at your own career, your own writing that you have done thus far, and you think that you are ready to add a new skill on top of it. Even if you maybe haven't even finished a first book, this is something to start building early.
[Brandon] The difficulty with being a writer… I mean, you may be sitting there thinking, I've dealt with deadlines, I've had schoolwork. We all have. This is a familiar thing to all of us. That's good. You have some practice. But there is something very dangerous about having a year and a half to do something, that if you don't do it consistently every week for the first eight months of that, your life is going to fall apart trying to do it for the last whatever, eight months of that. So, learning to be able to when it's not a pressure, keep to your deadline, that's a key skill. The other thing you've got to remember is you won't have a boss telling you to. Even if you have an editor, most of the time, your editor's not checking in that often. There assuming the book is working fine. They will go four or five months for checking in, and seeing how things are going, sometimes, if they're busy with other projects. If you have let yourself spend these five months being like, "Oh, I can get to it," or "I'm feeling really stressed right now, I'll play Xbox," and then… You're just setting yourself up to crash.
[Dan] My grandmother grew up on a ranch. She had all these awesome aphorisms. One thing that she always told us as kids was, "If you don't have time to do it right, you definitely don't have time to do it twice." Which is a principle that I apply to this. That it is about not just setting a deadline, but making a plan that is going to work now. So that you are using your time well now while it's not crunch time, because you don't want to get to crunch time, you want to avoid that as much as possible.
[Victoria] Also, especially early on in your deadline-written career, when you don't quite know all of your own nuances yet… All of your own… Like, I know that the first third of a book takes me roughly three times the amount of time to write that the last two thirds do. I cannot allot the same amount of time for every act in my book. So… You really only learn these things, because whatever works is what works for you, you only learn these things by doing. You need to make sure that you don't lean into procrastination techniques early on, or else you might find out the hard way that you don't work like that.
[Howard] Back in May, we talked about mental wellness. Just how to take care of yourself, and how sometimes you need to take days off. I mentioned the Munchkin deck project that I was involved in, and how incredibly educational that was. Crunch mode is definitely a thing that many of us, a lot of us, can do. But it's not something that you can maintain. It's never something that you should build into the project plan. The… When I have… It happens all the time. People will say, "I can't believe, how did you do this without missing a day? How is that…" Well, you do it, not missing a day, by having a huge buffer. My dad used to say, "You don't leave for the airport unless you've got enough time to change a flat tire." Which is not something I've ever had to do on my way to the airport, but that was just the way he built the plan. You have time to change a flat tire. I have time in my buffer, except this week, to get sick. To have the sewer line rupture. To have whatever.
 
[Victoria] Well, there's something else that I do want to bring up, which is once those deadlines become contractually inputted instead of personally inputted… The reason that it's so important that you stay on top of your side is because you're not the only cook in this kitchen. You can hit every one of your deadlines, but if you're the only person that you're planning on, something at another point in the pipeline can go wrong. An editor becomes late, a publisher becomes late, and all of a sudden, your very carefully orchestrated machine falls apart.
[Dan] And once you have multiple projects going, and you've made your perfect plan and you think this book is working great, then the other project that you've already handed off to the editor, they throw it back and say, "Hey, sorry this took me an extra month. I need you to turn around these edits by the end of the week." You're like, "But… That ruins everything!"
[Brandon] Well, I mean, this even happens with… This year it happened to me with, I got beta reads back on a book and there were some responses to the book that I was not expecting. Where I'm like, "Oh. I need to do another revision. I can see now why these are happening. But it means I need to take an extra month on this book." Although I was going to say, when Victoria was talking about editors being late, Dan and I know nothing about that.
[Laughter]
[Brandon] Oh, no.
 
[Brandon] Let's do our book of the week, which is actually a YouTube channel that I really like. This isn't to give you excuses to not write. But, Overly Sarcastic Productions is a delightful YouTube channel where they do summaries of history, summaries of mythology, or look at various writing and storytelling tropes, and present them in a funny way. Just explaining to you what they were, give you the Cliff Notes version of the history of Herodotus or the Cliff Notes version of what it is, the amnesia plot, and how it's used in various books. They are funny writers, they are funny deliverers. The woman who runs… Who is part of it does sketches for all these things and her art is a lot of fun. I just highly recommend it as 15 minute, 10 minute beats that you'll probably like because you like this podcast, that are focusing more on tools that can help you be a better storyteller. So, give them a look, Overly Sarcastic Productions.
 
[Brandon] Now, coming back around on this idea of deadlines. One thing that I wanted to bring up is it actually gets harder and harder the better your career goes. This is not something I was prepared for. You usually do get, when you first go full-time, a nice breathing room dump. Where you're like, "Oh. I have extra time. I have more time than I thought, than I ever had for my writing before." That's the most time you'll ever have. That year while you're writing before your first book comes out. My experience has been that once a book is sold, agents tend to be really good at getting you another project if you want one. It's generally a good idea to get a second project and be working on that. Once the book comes out, suddenly there's publicity to do and promotion. The more popular you become, the more successful you become, the more this takes a bite out of your time. To the point that I have less time to write now than I did when I was full-time working a job. Now, granted, I had a weird job where I could write at work. But I have less time than I did then. You would think, "Oh, Brandon, you're full-time as a writer. You would obviously have more time now."
[Dan] Just to give our listeners an idea, arranging this recording session with both Brandon and Victoria took us almost a year of planning.
[Chuckles]
[Dan] To find the right holes in the schedules. Because they're so busy.
[Victoria] I will say I'm definitely one of those that… I'm very grateful for how my career is going right now, but between… I have four publishers and I've been in 16 countries so far this year. If you don't think that takes a bite out of writing… And I know, I can hear people saying, like, "Oh, but you're so lucky." I am, but if I don't also find time to write more books, that luck is going to run out very quickly when I run out of products.
[Brandon] This is a good time in your lives, before you're published, to practice being able to juggle all of these things and know that you can work to a deadline even if other things are interfering. I wish I'd practiced it a little more during my unpublished days.
[Howard] It's… Boy. It may seem hard as a new writer to take the novel you've been working on and that you've revised and to say it's really just not ready yet and put it in the trunk. But… Boy, I gotta tell you, late career, having a trunk full of things that you know exactly how you put them together and you know exactly how to fix them and you've got a pretty good idea of how quickly that would go. That means that when an opportunity comes up where, hey, maybe I could file all the serial numbers off of this and turn it into some money, you can do exactly that.
[Victoria] Related to that, as well, I just want to say, do not undervalue the time between when you sell your first book and when that book hits shelves. That is the most beautiful time you will ever have. It is the clearest, free-est mental time you will ever have or reviews start coming in and before your monologue becomes a dialogue when it comes to your creative energy. But, like, cache anything you can, ideas, balance, learn good work life balance. Also, my favorite productive… Like, procrastinatory technique is the idea that social media is absolutely part of my job. I can do a whole lot of not writing being on social media and justify it as marketing. Really start to analyze, figure out what your best times of day for writing are, figure out when you can do this, figure out what's going to be anything sustainable. Because it's only going to get more complicated as you go down that path. So any… I know I've already said good habits, but any good habits that you can build early will serve you later.
 
[Brandon] If you can become one of the people that is really good at deadlines, that is worth gold in the industry. Because so many writers are… I won't say bad at this…
[Victoria] I'll say bad at it.
[Brandon] I would say…
[Laughter]
[Brandon] There are a lot of professional writers that the best they can do is keep up to date on the one thing they're working on, and that's a struggle. People who can juggle multiple things become very in demand. Even if you're not ending up as a bestseller, if you are a mid lister, but you are someone who can deliver something on time, there'll be work waiting for you at every corner. You'll never go hungry if you can turn in things on a deadline that is good quality work.
[Howard] My friend Jake Black has said on several occasions, be… You can be on time every time. You can be the absolute best in the industry. You can be awesome and fun and enjoyable to work with. If you can only pick two, you'll probably find work. Pick easy to work with and always on time, because being the absolute best at everything in the industry… Boy, that one's hard. The other two are so easy.
[Dan] Well, I wanted to say, that this is extra valuable, especially if you are mid list or even low list. Because you're going to need multiple revenue streams to pay the bills and feed your children. My kids want to eat every day. I don't know…
[Chuckles]
[Dan] Where they get off. But you have to have so many different projects and so many different irons in so many different fires that being able to come up with a good schedule is really valuable. I literally will take a print calendar, old caveman style, and I will mark on it every time that I can't write. Then I will start reverse engineering. Well, I've got this project that needs to be done by this day. Build into that how much do I think I can write in a day. How much… Give myself some extra days when I know I screw up, so that I am not immediately behind on the treadmill. Give myself some self-care time. Then, see how much I can compress that. That's how I do it.
 
[Brandon] Let's go to our homework, which hopefully will help you with this.
[Victoria] So. This homework theme of the day is, writing friends, not surprisingly, trying to get you to put some structure into that free-form of writing. I use a very particular app called the Forest app, it leans into the Pomadera method, essentially a timed writing sprint. The thing I like about the Forest app, it's only a couple of dollars. It is gamifying the entire process. You essentially pick a tree. You earn different kinds of trees to go in your forest. You grow different kinds of trees or certain amounts of time, while the Forest app is going. You cannot touch your phone and exit the app, or else the tree will die. The tree dies, and at the end of the day, you have a sad little dead defecated tree in your forest. The only thing I think could make it better would be if it were kittens or puppies instead. But, in the meantime, the Forest app is a nice way to keep track of writing sprints and find a way to just add a little bit of structure.
[Dan] You heard it here first, Victoria wishes she could kill kittens and puppies.
[Victoria] No one wants… I would never kill kittens and puppies.
[Chuckles]
[Victoria] I would never miss a writing sprint.
[Brandon] This has been Writing Excuses. You're out of excuses, now go write.
 
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Writing Excuses 6.10: Orson Scott Card's M.I.C.E. Quotient

From http://www.writingexcuses.com/2011/08/07/writing-excuses-6-10-scott-cards-m-i-c-e-quotient/

Key points: MICE: milieu, idea, character, and event. Milieu: where the story takes place, starts when you enter the space, ends when you exit it. Stories about setting. Idea: start with a question, end when you answer the question. Character: start with a dissatisfied character, end with satisfaction or at least reconciliation. Event: something is wrong with the status quo, and ends with a solution. The MICE framework can be used at multiple levels, story, chapter, scene. Make promises and fulfill them. These can be nested, but close them in the order you open them. (Actually, reverse order -- MI ... IM).
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[Brandon] All right, then. So, writing prompt. I should probably make myself do it, because I haven't done it in a while. So, writing prompt is do this with a different fairytale. Let's pick one.
[Dan] MICE quotient for Red Riding Hood?
[Mary] Red Riding Hood's a good one.
[Brandon] Red Riding Hood. That's a great one. MICE quotient for Red Riding Hood. Try and write a page of each story of the different things for MICE. Okay.
[Dan] Sweet.
[Brandon] This has been Writing Excuses. You're out of excuses, now go write.

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